10篇初中英语书面表达,附高分范文模板

中考书面表达题考查学生在特定情景中综合运用语言进行书面表达的能力。《义务教育英语课程标准》对“写”的五级目标要求为:

1. 能根据写作要求,收集、准备素材。

2. 能独立起草短文、短信等,并在教师的指导下进行修改。

3. 能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。

4. 能简单描述人物或事件。

5. 能根据图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。

 

考点分析

通过分析近三年全国各省市的中考书面表达题,我们发现:中考书面表达题基本以有控制的写作为主,即除提供话题或标题外,一般都会提供写作要点或提示写作内容、给出首句、规定大概词数等。话题大多贴近学生生活,让学生有话可写,如日常活动、人际交往、家庭、朋友与周围的人等;体裁以记叙文和应用文居多,其次是说明文和议论文;提示方式有表格、思维导图、文字、图文等;词数一般为80-100。

 

评分标准

多数省市书面表达题总分为15分,按五个档次给分。评分时,评分老师先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。故同学们在写作时内容要点应齐全、高级词汇应多用、句型及语法结构应正确、上下文应连贯、语言应得体、单词拼写和标点符号应正确、书写应规范。

 

各档次的给分范围和要求:

一档(13-15分):

所写内容要点全面且按照任务要求进行了适当的发挥,内容丰富。应用了高级语言结构和词汇,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯,表达清楚,语法结构正确,没有或有个别单词拼写和标点符号错误,具备较强的语言运用能力。

二档(10-12分):

所写内容要点全面且有一定的发挥,但内容欠丰富。应用的高级语言结构和词汇能满足任务要求,句子较通顺,表达较清楚,语法结构正确,有少量的单词拼写和标点符号错误。

三档(7-9分):

所写内容只是简单说明了要点,不够丰富得体。语言表达简单,行文不够连贯,句子不够通顺,有部分语法结构、单词拼写和标点符号错误。

四档(4-6分):

所写内容偏离要点且过少。语言不规范,句子不条理,行文不连贯,语法结构、单词拼写和标点符号错误较多。

五档(0-3分):

未完成所规定的任务或所写内容与要求几乎无关,内容杂乱,不知所云。语言很不通顺,用词很不准确,语法结构、单词拼写和标点符号错误过多,几乎难以读懂。

 

分话题写作专项训练

 

个人情况&家庭、朋友与周围的人&个人兴趣

 A

假如你是李华,得知某英文报社要招聘一名兼职校园小记者,你有意应聘。请你给该报社写一封自荐信。

内容包括:

1. 表示对该工作感兴趣;

2. 说明你的优势;

3. 希望得到回复。

要求:

1. 内容要全面,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

2. 词数不少于80,自荐信的格式及开头已给出,但不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m glad to learn that you are looking for a part-time English reporter.

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Yours,

Li Hua

 B

初中生活即将结束,三年来教过你的老师很多,他们都给过你很多帮助,其中一定有一位老师给你留下了最深刻的印象。最近恰逢某中学生英文杂志社举办题为“The teacher I will never forget”的征文活动,请你根据下面的思维导图写一篇短文介绍令你难忘的一位老师,然后参加此活动。

要求:

1. 内容应包括思维导图中的所有要点;

2. 紧扣主题,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

3. 词数不少于100。

The teacher I will never forget

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日常活动&学校

 A

英语课上,老师组织全班同学就“周末活动”进行小组调查,下面是你所在的小组的调查结果。假如你是李华,是你们小组的发言人,请你根据下面的调查表写一篇发言稿,向全班同学汇报你们小组的情况并谈谈你的看法。

要求:

1. 内容要全面,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

2. 词数不少于100,发言稿的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。

Weekend activity survey

Li Hua

Du Li

Song

Wenjie

Yu

Guoguo

do homework

take after-school classes

×

play sports

×

×

play computer games

×

watch TV

×

do housework

×

×

×

×

Good morning, everybody. I’m Li Hua. Here are the results of our group’s survey of weekend activities.

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That’s all. Thanks for your attention!

 B

请以“My _________ junior high school life”为题写一篇英语短文,谈一谈你的三年初中学校生活,然后给某中学生英语学习网站投稿。

要求:

1. 先将题目补充完整,然后再进行写作;

2. 紧扣主题,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

3. 词数不少于80,短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。

My _________ junior high school life

How time flies! My junior high school life will come to an end soon.

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情感与情绪&人际交往

 A

全国文明城市每三年评选一次。为响应你市市政府发出的“争创全国文明城市(national civilized city)”的号召,你所在的国际学校英语俱乐部向全体同学发出了“创建文明城市,从我做起”的倡议。假如你是李华,是你校英语俱乐部的主席,请你根据下面的思维导图写一份倡议书。

要求:

1. 内容应包括思维导图中的所有要点,可适当增加一些细节;

2. 语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

3. 词数不少于80,倡议书的格式、开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。

参考词汇:尊敬respect;斑马线the zebra crossing;吐痰 spit

Dear fellow students,

Our city is now making an effort to become a national civilized city. As middle school students, what should we do?

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Let’s try our best to build a civilized city!

English Club

 B
假如你是某中学生英文杂志“烦恼我来听”栏目的编辑,最近你收到一名中学生的求助信。请你根据信件内容写一封回信,谈谈你自己的看法,并提出合理建议。

Dear Editor,

I’m a junior high school student. I am having some trouble with my best friend, Zhang Jun. Last week, he wanted to copy my paper in the math exam, but I didn’t agree with him, so he failed the exam. As a result, he doesn’t talk to me and even says bad things about me. It makes me sad and angry. I’m afraid that I will lose my best friend forever. What should I do?

Yours,

Trouble

要求:

1. 语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

2. 词数100左右,信件的格式及开头已给出,但不计入总词数。

参考词汇:作弊cheat

Dear Trouble,

I’m sorry to hear that you are having some trouble with your best friend.
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Yours,

Editor

 

节假日活动

假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Kim对中国传统节日春节很感兴趣,希望你能给她介绍一下该节日。请你根据下面的要点提示给Kim写一封电子邮件,向她介绍春节。

要点提示:

1. 春节的时间;

2. 春节的传统习俗;

3. 近些年庆祝春节的新方式。

要求:

1. 内容应包括所有的要点提示;

2. 语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;3. 词数不少于100,电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。

参考词汇:

装饰decorate;

对联couplet;

放鞭炮set off firecrackers;

春节联欢晚会the Spring Festival Gala

Dear Kim,

How are you? I’m really glad that you are interested in China’s Spring Festival. Now I’d like to introduce it to you.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

卫生与健康

 A

每年9月20日是“全国爱牙日”。为响应教育部关爱青少年身体健康的号召,让青少年养成爱护牙齿的好习惯,你校特组织了一次英文演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。

内容包括:

1. Why are teeth very important?

2. Do you have strong and healthy teeth?

3. How do you usually take care of your teeth?

要求:

1. 内容要全面、紧扣主题,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

2. 词数不少于100,演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。

参考词汇:咀嚼chew;牙刷toothbrush

Hello, everyone! As we know, taking care of our teeth is very important.

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Taking good care of our teeth will help us live a long, healthy, pain-free life, so let’s care for our teeth from now on.

 B

近年来,中学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注。为呼吁中学生关注自身健康,你校将开展以“关爱健康”为主题的英文手抄报比赛,请你写一篇稿件参加比赛。

内容包括:

1. 健康的重要性;

2. 中学生面临哪些健康问题;

 3. 保持健康的建议。

要求:

1. 内容要全面、紧扣主题,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

 2. 词数不少于100。

参考词汇:均衡的饮食balanced diet

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安全与救护

随着智能手机的普及,上网已成为中学生日常生活的一部分。为引导中学生安全上网,你校将开展“共建网络安全”主题教育系列活动,为此你校英语角特举办题为“How to be safe >”的演讲比赛,请你结合生活实际写一篇演讲稿参赛。

要求:

1. 内容要全面、紧扣主题,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

2. 词数100左右,演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。

How to be safe>Hello, everyone, I’d like to share with you my ideas about this topic. Nowadays we can’t live without the Internet. Am I right?

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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!

旅游与交通&计划与安排

 A

中考结束后,很多同学想利用暑假去旅游。请根据下面的提示问题用英语写一篇短文介绍你的旅行计划,然后发布在你校的英文论坛上。

提示问题:

1. Where are you going and who are you going with?

2. What places of interest will you visit?

3. What will you do there?

要求:

1. 语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

2. 词数100左右,短文的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。

Summer vacation is coming. It’s a good idea to go traveling.

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I believe I’ll have a wonderful trip.

 B

随着人们生活品质的提高,旅游成为了人们生活中不可或缺的一种休闲方式。你是喜欢自由行还是跟团游呢?最近某中学生英文论坛针对这一问题发起了讨论,请你根据下面的要点提示用英语写一篇短文发布在该论坛上。

要点提示:

1. 自由行的优势;

2. 跟团游的优势;

3. 你的选择。

要求:

1. 内容应包括所有的要点提示;

2. 语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

3. 词数不少于100,短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。

参考词汇:风景sights

There’re two ways to go traveling. One is traveling alone and the other is traveling with a group.

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语言学习

下周英语口语课上,你班同学将就“如何练习英语口语”这一话题进行交流。请你根据下面的思维导图准备一份发言稿,向大家介绍你练习英语口语的方法。

要求:

1. 内容应包括思维导图中的所有要点,可适当增加一些细节;

2. 语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

3. 词数100左右,发言稿的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。

参考词汇:

以英语为母语的人native speaker;

模仿imitate;

语调tone

Hello, everyone! I’m glad to have this chance to share my ways of practicing spoken English.

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Thank you for listening!

世界与环境

随着大家环保意识的增强,“低碳”这个词在生活中随处可见,如低碳产品、低碳消费、低碳旅游等,越来越多的人提倡“低碳”生活方式。

请你根据下面的提示词语,用英语写一篇短文谈谈你对低碳生活的理解以及作为中学生我们应该如何低碳生活,然后给某英文网络论坛投稿。

提示词语:bike, bus, turn off, lights, tap, paper, plastic bags, disposable products (一次性产品)

要求:

1. 提示词语必须全部用上,要点要全面、层次要清晰;

2. 词数不少于100,短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。

Living a low-carbon lifestyle plays an important part in saving the world.

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故事与诗歌

 A

一只小猴子发现一个和他差不多大的西瓜,他搬不动这个西瓜,他会怎么做呢?请发挥你的想象,以“A clever monkey”为题,写一篇关于猴子和西瓜的故事,然后向你校英文报的“故事园地”投稿。

要求:

1. 故事情节要紧扣主题,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

2. 词数100左右,故事的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。

参考词汇:滚动roll

A clever monkey

A little monkey found a big watermelon while he was playing outside.

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 B

英语作文课上,老师要求你们阅读下面一首中国古诗,然后写一篇作文谈谈你对这首古诗的理解以及你的体会和认识。

要求:

1. 内容要紧扣古诗主题,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;

2. 词数100左右。

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参考答案

个人情况&家庭、朋友与周围的人&个人兴趣

A

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m glad to learn that you are looking for a part-time English reporter. I’m quite interested in the job.

I think I’m fit for the job. As a middle school student, I have read a lot so I have a wide knowledge of many things. I like English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I enjoy working with others. Most importantly, I have experience. I once worked as a reporter for my school radio station. I’m sure I can do a good job if you give me a chance.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

B

The teacher I will never forget

The teacher I will never forget is Mr. Wang, my English teacher.

Mr. Wang is 31 years old. He became a teacher 8 years ago. He likes playing sports and reading. He is strict with us, but he is also patient and kind. He helps us not only in class but also after class. About two years ago, Mr. Wang noticed that I was worried about my listening. So he gave me lots of advice and helped me improve my listening. With his help, my listening greatly improved.

I will never forget Mr. Wang. He is one of the best English teachers I have ever met. I wish him the best of luck in the future!

日常活动&学校

A

Good morning, everybody. I’m Li Hua. Here are the results of our group’s survey of weekend activities. There are four students in our group. All of us do our homework on weekends. Three of us have to take after-school classes. Two of us play sports. Three of us play computer games and watch TV. I’m sorry to say no one in our group does any housework on weekends.

I think it’s necessary for us to do our homework and we should do it well and quickly. We shouldn’t spend lots of time playing computer games and watching TV. Instead, we should play sports more often. It’s really good for our health. Whether we should take after-school classes or not, I think that depends. I think it’s good for us to do some housework. It helps to develop our independence and also shows our love for our parents.

That’s all. Thanks for your attention!

B

My colorful junior high school life

How time flies! My junior high school life will come to an end soon. I think my school life has been colorful. During these three years, I have learned how to get on with my classmates and I’ve made lots of friends. From kind, helpful teachers, I have learned not only useful knowledge, but also how to be a better person. I’ve experienced success, failure, sadness, happiness, nervousness and excitement. How valuable they are! Besides, I’ve learned how to live a healthy life. I believe all of these will make a big difference to my life in the future.

情感与情绪&人际交往

A

Dear fellow students,

Our city is now making an effort to become a national civilized city. As middle school students, what should we do?

First of all, we should respect our teachers, parents and the old. Secondly, it’s always good to be kind, friendly and helpful to others. Thirdly, we must obey traffic rules. When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn’t cross the streets when the traffic lights are red. Fourthly, it’s important and necessary to help protect the environment. For example, we shouldn’t spit or throw litter here and there. Lastly, we shouldn’t waste food, water or electricity. They are important to us. It’s everyone’s duty not to waste resources. 

Let’s try our best to build a civilized city!

English Club

B

Dear Trouble,

I’m sorry to hear that you are having some trouble with your best friend. But don’t be upset. I believe no matter how difficult it is, you can work it out.

In my opinion, it’s wrong to cheat. I think you need to have an honest talk with Zhang Jun so that he can understand you better. Since he doesn’t want to talk with you, why not write to him or ask your other friends for help? Above all, you should encourage him to get good grades in exams by studying hard instead of cheating. Besides, you should help him improve his math.

Honesty brings friends. I’m looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours,

Editor

节假日活动

Dear Kim,

How are you? I’m really glad that you are interested in China’s Spring Festival. Now I’d like to introduce it to you.

The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals in China. It usually comes in January or February. To get ready for the festival, people clean and decorate their homes and put up couplets. During the festival people set off firecrackers for good luck, watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV and get together for a big dinner. Everyone wears their new clothes and visits their parents and relatives. Children also get red envelopes filled with “lucky money”.

In recent years, however, there have been some new ways of celebrating the festival. To avoid causing noise and air pollution, people in most cities set off electronic firecrackers instead of traditional ones. What’s more, more and more people choose to travel during the festival.   

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

卫生与健康

A

Hello, everyone! As we know, taking care of our teeth is very important. Teeth help us chew food and speak clearly. With teeth we can look our best. I used to eat too much candy. Once, I got a toothache and didn’t feel like eating. My mother took me to see the dentist. The dentist used a machine to fill my teeth, so I was afraid and I cried. Since then, I’ve realized the importance of taking care of my teeth, so I do the following to protect them. First, I brush my teeth three times a day and usually spend three minutes brushing them. Second, I get a new toothbrush every three months. Third, I don’t eat too much sweet or icy food. I eat more fruit and vegetables. Fourth, I visit my dentist twice a year.

Taking good care of our teeth will help us live a long, healthy, pain-free life, so let’s care for our teeth from now on.

B

As the saying goes, health is wealth. When you have your health, you have everything. When you don’t have it, nothing else matters at all. But some of us don’t care about our health. For example, some of us don’t have enough sleep so we feel sleepy in class; some of us are weak because we don’t have healthy eating habits; some of us exercise less so we’re becoming stressed.

It’s time for us to do something to keep healthy. First, we should go to bed early and get up early. Second, we should eat a balanced diet and stay away from junk food. Next, we should exercise for at least one hour every day. Also, think of nice things when you get up in the morning.

安全与救护

How to be safe on the Internet

Hello, everyone, I’d like to share with you my ideas about this topic. Nowadays we can’t live without the Internet. Am I right?

The Internet is a great place full of wonderful information, but it is also full of many dangers. Here I will give you a few tips on how to be safe on the Internet. First, never post or trade personal photographs. Second, never give out personal information, such as your home address, your mobile phone number, your school name or your location. Use only your screen name. Third, never agree to meet anyone from a chat group in person. Fourth, never reply to a dangerous e-mail or a WeChat message. Fifth, always tell a parent about any communication or conversation that was scary.  

That’s all. Thanks for your listening!

旅游与交通&计划与安排

A

Summer vacation is coming. It’s a good idea to go traveling.

I’m going to Beijing with my parents. We’ll go there by high-speed train. We can not only save a lot of time but also enjoy the scenery along the way. We’ll visit the Great Wall first because it’s a symbol of our country. After that we’ll go to Tian’anmen Square, the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace because I’m very interested in Chinese history. Of course, I will eat some Beijing duck. It is really delicious. And during the trip, I will take a lot of photos and buy some gifts for my grandparents and my friends.

I believe I’ll have a wonderful trip.

B

There’re two ways to go traveling. One is traveling alone and the other is traveling with a group.

If you choose to travel alone, you can manage your time freely and choose to visit your favorite sights. What’s more, it’s a chance for you to learn to take care of yourself. If you choose to travel with a group, you can make new friends and help each other while traveling. Besides, with a guide’s help, you won’t get lost and you don’t need to look for a hotel or a restaurant by yourself.

As for me, I choose to travel alone. I want to spend all of my time visiting places I like. In this way, I can not only enjoy my vacation more but it can also make me a stronger and more independent person.

语言学习

Hello, everyone! I’m glad to have this chance to share my ways of practicing spoken English.

First, as I’m not a native speaker, I pay attention to how I pronounce every single word. To make myself understood, I always try to make sure that I pronounce every word correctly. I read English texts aloud for half an hour every morning. Second, I imitate how native speakers speak. I usually read after listening to some movie dialogues and imitate the tones. Third, I have made a foreign friend online. She helps me correct the way I speak English. Last but not least, I practice speaking every day. As we know, practice makes perfect.

Thank you for listening!

世界与环境

Living a low-carbon lifestyle plays an important part in saving the world. It means we should live on less energy and make less waste in our daily life.

As middle school students, we can do a lot of things to live a low-carbon lifestyle. First, we should go to school by bike or by bus instead of by car. Second, we should always remember to turn off the lights when we leave a room. Third, we should turn off the tap when we aren’t using water. Last, we should make full use of paper and use fewer plastic bags or disposable products.

If everyone can live this lifestyle from now on, our world will become more and more beautiful.

故事与诗歌

A

A clever monkey

A little monkey found a big watermelon while he was playing outside. He was very happy. But the watermelon was so heavy that he couldn’t carry it. However, the little monkey didn’t want to give up. He sat down and thought for a while. Suddenly, he came up with a good idea. He rolled the watermelon to his home! When his mother saw such a big watermelon, she was surprised. After she knew how the little monkey got the watermelon home, she smiled and praised him. From the story, we can learn that nothing is impossible if we use our brain. Never say die no matter what happens!

B

This poem was written by Meng Jiao. It tells us that our mothers are worried about us when we are away from home. A mother’s heart is always with her children. A mother’s love is the greatest in the world.

Our mothers not only gave us life but also raised us from babies to adults. They gave all their love and care to us. So, as children, we should show our thanks to them. Don’t be rude to them. Be polite to them and make them proud of us. Everyone should try their best to make their mothers happy.

 

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